my writings

i am not so good on writing and don't know how to make the reader happy based on what i wrote, but still i have to try and try till i will learned, since i really want to write. if anyone would like to comment on this you are all welcome.......so i can correct myself, but then this is just a sort of "something that goes on the mind of someone who is retired from work ever-since graduating from college till the children have graduated also,and have their own work".